Good poem again it's messy i though i found a constant rhyme scheme there for a minute and then it was just confusing so i stopped looking at it so besides the messiness with the rhyming and again the simple rhymes this was good it was pretty well worded you can tell you care a lot about this subject, so good overall 4/5
Very well expressed. I feel this way many days and always wonder "why" a friendship ends. Unfortunately, sometimes, the friendship wasn't meant to happen. Or else, we're suppose to learn from these types of friendships. Never feel guilty though. Sometimes, people just want to take advantage of you, and after that, they don't care anymore. I will be here if you ever need anyone to listen.
Again, great poetry! I'm proud of you! Keep up the great work! 5/5!!
11 years ago
by Tara Kay
Wow, good poem, well written. Is true for many friendships. keep it up