Comments : Why is our friendship over????

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    Ok, Its good. But the rhyming scheme was kind of scattered and it was hard to keep a steady flow. Also it was sort of predictable.

  • 12 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Thank you Barbra! I read some of your poems and they were great! keep of the amazing work!
    Sammy

  • 12 years ago

    by carly

    Wow wow wow 5/5 its amazing great job :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Nice poem...thanks for leaving me a comment.

    ::MELI::

  • 12 years ago

    by ebony-rose

    Hmm,, different the flow is rather difficult btu brillaint appart from that

  • 12 years ago

    by 1/2 brEed_hispAnic_cAt

    Ur poems r very good, keep doin wat u do. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I liked the thought you put into the poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Your poems all tend to have a rather scatterd rhyming pattern. i liked this poem. it had alot of feeling, and it makes alot of sence to people who have been there themselves.

    Ruby

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent poem. it seemed to me that a couple rhymes were forced. but the poem still deserves a 5/5! keep up the gr8 work!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    Good poem again it's messy i though i found a constant rhyme scheme there for a minute and then it was just confusing so i stopped looking at it so besides the messiness with the rhyming and again the simple rhymes this was good it was pretty well worded you can tell you care a lot about this subject, so good overall 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Milla

    Great poem.it speaks the truth.i really liek it.ur a great poet keep it up
    ~*~Jamilla~*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    "Your not looking at me?"
    I think you meant "you're".

    "This is absord"
    I think you meant "absurd". =)

    When writing a poem, I suggest you write with proper English or at least attempt to spell everything right.

    You have a very nice topic going on, but I think you can chose better words to express your feelings on this subject.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Loves it.........this is awasome..thanxz for the comment of mine, could you please check out soem of my other...thank you, i'll comment on more of urs

  • 12 years ago

    by LettersFromEnnis

    I love this poem so much! Keep up the great work! 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by blueyed baby

    This seems to fit exactly what i am going through and this is and awesome poem i hope to see more of your work

  • 12 years ago

    by firexflys

    Awww nice job girl i know just how this feels keep ypur head up and dont be so easy to give up. 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by JENNIFER

    The great but if that poem is for real i know how you feel cuase i lost a friend one day we got in a fight over something stupid!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very well expressed. I feel this way many days and always wonder "why" a friendship ends. Unfortunately, sometimes, the friendship wasn't meant to happen. Or else, we're suppose to learn from these types of friendships. Never feel guilty though. Sometimes, people just want to take advantage of you, and after that, they don't care anymore. I will be here if you ever need anyone to listen.

    Again, great poetry! I'm proud of you! Keep up the great work! 5/5!!

    Sincerely,

    Michelle

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, good poem, well written. Is true for many friendships. keep it up
    tara xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by blueyed baby

    This is one i can relate to and it has so much meaning to me. i loved it! keep up the good work and i give you a 5!