Comments : Secret Fears

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    EXCELLENT!!! I really, really liked this poem! Definitely a 5. You wrote in perfectly. Keep it up, Amber:)

  • 13 years ago

    by sinister

    know how u feel. dont tell my mom stuff too cause she has enough to worry about. wicked poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Amber

    I really like everyone's quotes, but I don't want yall to think that this poem is about my mom! It was written for my aunt! She's the one whose raisin' me!

  • 12 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good poem, full of emotion and that's what makes a poem good. Good rhyme and flow.
    Add punctuation ,'s and stuff it creates more of a flow and tells the reader how you want it to be read.

    ~~Sweetie

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    This is how i feel as well! i have my fears but am 2 scared 2 make it sum1 elses worry and problem! but sumtime we do need 2 let people no..we can help each other! this was writting perfectly for the type of subject ur writting for

  • 12 years ago

    by John Fleece

    She is loving and caring I take it. To face fear u have to fear fear itself. if that makes any sense

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    An inspiration to read.