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by Amanda Bee
EXCELLENT!!! I really, really liked this poem! Definitely a 5. You wrote in perfectly. Keep it up, Amber:)
know how u feel. dont tell my mom stuff too cause she has enough to worry about. wicked poem
I really like everyone's quotes, but I don't want yall to think that this poem is about my mom! It was written for my aunt! She's the one whose raisin' me!
Good poem, full of emotion and that's what makes a poem good. Good rhyme and flow.
Add punctuation ,'s and stuff it creates more of a flow and tells the reader how you want it to be read.
This is how i feel as well! i have my fears but am 2 scared 2 make it sum1 elses worry and problem! but sumtime we do need 2 let people no..we can help each other! this was writting perfectly for the type of subject ur writting for
by John Fleece
She is loving and caring I take it. To face fear u have to fear fear itself. if that makes any sense
An inspiration to read.