Comments : Mom and dad

  • 13 years ago

    by jescelle

    very good sweetheart..... i know how you feel......trust me, its gonna ba hard for along time, but the man of your dreams will come someday and sweep u off your feet......
    jescelle

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    hey great poem i can relate to a certain degree. well done for managing to express ur emotions, i tend to write nearly all of my poems in the early hours of the morning as i can't sleep because of nightmares. please read and comment on some of my poems if u have a chance. thanks and well done, excellent 5/5 keep writin