Good poem, I liked it alot.
My favorite parts were "The sorrow becomes / a larger burden day after day"
and "I've been too far / to where I'm lost / and believe I'll never find the way back / to the person i once was."

Keep up the good work *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Hey. that was sad. but it was also touching, the second sentence seemed to have a little "hiccup" like a grammatical error. that was all.
keep on writing, and I'll keep on commenting!