Comments : The black rose of Death

  • 13 years ago

    by Nikki

    hey this is really good. My favorite verse is Here we all make mistakes and then regret, we wish to have the love we never felt. And want to get lost in a deep pool of peace, To break free and finally find our release. Alot of great feeling in this part i think. Keep it up 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Very well done, rhyme, content, style....superb.

  • 13 years ago

    by Alexandra

    thas awesome! i gave you a 5. Thanks for your comments i really appercaite it!

  • 13 years ago

    by XxCrimsonxSinxX

    This poem was really gooooooooooooooooood keep it up *hugs*

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    beautiful work

    For the ones that hurt… and are torn apart,
    The rose turns black like their broken heart…

    I love that. Well written poem, keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by BittersweetDecay

    Hope someday I'll write as good as u...though i don't think so:))

  • 12 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Awesome poem!!! great job!