Comments : Fairy Tale Reality Check

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This isvery cute. I love how you have the sense of humor and openess to write about fairy tales. Very original by what I have seen and very good as well.

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Haha hey, this is really good...very creative!! haha, take care and keep on writing..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 12 years ago

    by M J U

    Excellent! Would you mind if I share this? Funny and full of character.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lemma

    Great poem, 5/5. Very clever coz i must've bin hard 2 rhyme.
    Emma x

  • 12 years ago

    by yup

    Really creative, fantastic effort!! 5/5. Keep up the great work

    Kelly

  • 12 years ago

    by NIKKI

    OMG THAT WAS GREAT!!! IT WAS SO CUTE AND REALLY FUNNY AND TRUE. ITS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST POEMS I HAVE READ SO FAR. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazingly entertaining! I love fairy tales and the twist you put on them is hilarious! Great poem~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by SuicidePrincess

    Hahah thats funny stuff good job I loved reading it you are very talented and creative

  • 12 years ago

    by Anjelika

    Haha dude that's awesome.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    Wow...that was so cool, it really flowed! good job hun! ~*Lyz*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    That's really funny!

  • 12 years ago

    by sam kings

    so different and sooo good. really funny, like side splittingly funny,keep it up. (if u can match a poem like this) and il say it again... very different. in a good way. samx

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    lol, adorable...5

  • 12 years ago

    by step on me

    that was soo cute send me some more

  • 12 years ago

    by xoXkarinaXox

    heyhey...that was awsum! i love it..it really made me smile..

  • 12 years ago

    by Rolo

    LOL...HIL-AR-I-OUS. Like the others said, very original. You managed to keep a good flow, and keep me laughing. Great job! 5/5!

    ~rolo

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    That is so cute and unique..lol. It ended really well and especially the last few stanzas fit in very well! My favorite one was the one about Ariel the mermaid trading her voice for feet. Lol. Very nice, I don't really have any critique.Take care,
    Dorotea

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    lol very good i loved it i even read it aloud to my brother he loved it too!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Loved it, plain and simple. Very well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Haha Cute girl!!! It was excellent and thats probably what i'd also do:) 5*