I've looked into alot of your work, this isn't the best, but its still good, enough for a 5/5, you kept it going and it went nicely with the title! good job! 5/5!

aww it doesnt sound stupid. it was so sweet. keep it up.! 5/5

really good except that and ode has 5 lines in each stanza! keep up the good poems! luv always!