I can imagine this as a song :D
Nice work hun. <3

[Your words make me smile, i don't need losers in my life and just yesterday i got rid of my bf of 2 years. Onwards and UPwards :D]

Love this, love you,
- Kals.

if i read it correctly it sounds like two poeple haveing a hard time in a relationship and he's saying lets work it out. if i'm totally wrong about the idea, sorry! wonderful job though!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

wow...this is amazing!!!! very nicely said. i can really see this as a song. keep up the brilliant work. can't wait to read more!
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