hmmm this was interesting

I liked the poem, had a nice flow, just a little to few rhymes. But then again, I think if there is a nice flow to a poem it doesn't really need a bunch of rhymes since it sounds nice anyway:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

There doesn't seem to be much struture, but rhyme or not it flows pretty well, I like this type of poem, like you're just writing out your feelings as they come... Keep up the good works. :)

i liked it but it needs a stronger ending

I like this poem cuz it has lots of emotion and feeling and its just good 5/5.

I like it its good but doesnt have sumptin i dont no wut buit yeah lol sry not tryin to b rude

This is a clever poem... written in a nice way..
enjoyed reading it
5/5 crystal
great going !!