Oh I love it! I know what you mean with the line: "God can't let me in"
Even though it is simple, sometimes it does seem like i've skrewed up to much for heaven. Well I really liked the poem, keep it up.

"I'm sitting beside myself
In this perfect hell"

- I love it. Those two lines are amazing. The oxymoron of your life being a "perfect hell" is quite tragically written.
Remember i'm always here for you girl. [said that a million times i no :P <3]

Love yah sweet,
+ ^Kal.

i think it fits perfectly fine in dark poems! i too see no other catigory that it would work better in. sorry i've been to writing camp so i'm just starting to get around to the new poems of people!

~PLP~ lilslam~ lots of hugs and love!