i can tell the pain and the sturggle, of not wanting to tell but the needing and wanting to tell.

the poem has a sense of ergancy to it. I liked it, well done. The whole Christan atitude to it is very powerful.

the poem has a sense of ergancy to it. I liked it, well done. The whole Christan atitude to it is very powerful.

Thanx to those who commented!

wow that is an awesome poem especially for some one new that is really awesome i am kinda new too i am 13 and my name is casey if you get a chance then could you read some of my poems adn comment and rate tehm i will really apprieciate it
thnax
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