sounds really good. you really like this mysterious person huh? your words of choice are really well thought out. i liked it. 4/5. im gonna go check out some more of your poems. k? cool. yeah....bye!
p.s-by the way, you dont have to, but if you have the chance, could you come by and grill my poems? thnx!! yeah. bye!
Nice poem. It was very well thought out. I only saw one flaw, that one line where you said "you made me happy, not blue" Kinda turned me off, because it seemed quite mediocre compared to the rest of the poem. But the thought process that went into the whole poem seems like a lot. Good job.