I like the poem...it was well written and flowed very well BUT this "take a beating" stuff is a little whacky. I hope you didn't mean literally....and were talking more along the lines of hard times and not an actual BEATING. That's NOT love sweetie...lol I would suggest you change your to you're where necessary and capitalize where necessary......NICE WRITE!! :)
Thats the most brilliant poem I have read in a long time! Buzzing with emotion and you can read that what your saying is coming from the depths f your heart....You're an amazing poet I love you're work - I wouldn't mind some tips- Please comment and vote on some of mine xx
~*~ DarkTink ~*~
I think everyone has been there at one point or another. I get an overwhelming feeling when I read your poem. I have definatley had those same feelings and was unable to express myself the way you have.
Keep up the great work. You rock!