by XxTeArSxX17 Jul 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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YOU HURT ME BAD |
by Stephanie
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AMAZING.. I loved it!!! I'm definately adding you to my faves.. Keep up the good work!!! :-) |
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great poem. I loved it. 5/5 |
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really really welldone! ur very talented! |
by lilia
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wow... amazing words. i really can relate. keep it up. and please check out my poem"the things you said" |
by Mat
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the rhythm seemed a little off, and the rhymes seemed a little bit forced, but thats cool because its hard to rhyme well and maintain good emotion. Good job, though, it felt powerful. |