Comments : Cliffs edge

  • 13 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    I like your ideas; they were very original and good. However the rhythm was a bit disruptive with line breaks. I really enjoyed your ideas though and your wording. Keep on writing and stay strong.
    luv kt

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    nice job...very sorry you feel this way...5/5 eep it up...luv yas mwah


  • 13 years ago

    by crystal

    very well written. very sad.
    keep up the good work.