Comments : Not too deep (part 1)

  • 13 years ago

    by sami

    great job glad i could help ya with it
    it rocks
    love ya sami

  • 13 years ago

    by Iyla

    o man that was amazing, great write sweetie keep it up. 5/5 def. im speechless

  • 13 years ago

    by Delilah

    that is so deep shit..loved it


  • 13 years ago

    by Autumn

    wow, it's outstanding!

  • 13 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    wow. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Theresa

    That is really good make a part 2 please

  • 13 years ago

    by Summer

    I love that poem! you are very very talanted! thanks so much for writting it.<3333333

  • 13 years ago

    by CaMeRoN

    that was a great poem,good one!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Anthony burke

    the poem was a nice read but there are parts that need work, sometimes it felt like you couldn't think of what to put so you just put a non-ryming word in there, nice over-all job 4/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Prettiest Zombie

    wow so good blar blar blar its gr8 idk wht 2 say so blar blar the blars count as gooooooood in my words gr8 all gd c ya xx

  • 13 years ago

    by _

    wow!! great poem really awesome ! 5/5 :)

  • 13 years ago

    by PJ

    wow thats a great poem you need to thank you friends a little more it was wounderful heart felt hope to see more

  • 13 years ago

    by JLT

    *cries* It's beautiful, i love it. It's so sad. It's kinda like "Love's Curse". *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets.


  • 13 years ago



    Man this poem was deadly you just wanna read more..each stanza keeps you stuck me when you write part 2..

    good luck with that..

    Lisa x)

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashton

    i liked this a lot it was written well i wish i could write this way plz comment on mine

  • 13 years ago

    by Stinapoo1991

    Hey Emmy What's up that's really good i Likey let me write a poem and yeah okay byez

  • 13 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    wow, great poem. I loved it keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Katy......

    this was brilliant i now exactly how this person feels from personal experieces.
    Youv explained it so well

  • 13 years ago

    by R F

    Althogh its a traditional subject to write about, but I believe that everyone his unique way writting about something. and you do have your style, and its really nice to share writing a poem with friends, I love this idea.

    but I think the girl shouldn't kill her self, If the boy left her for another, he wouldnt even worth hurting herself for such a person. That's how i think things should be with such people
    That was so sad.

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis

  • 13 years ago

    by mz BrokenHearted B i t c h

    i loved ur poem it was really good i enjoyed it