Comments : Not too deep (part 1)

  • 12 years ago

    by sami

    great job glad i could help ya with it
    it rocks
    love ya sami

  • 12 years ago

    by Iyla

    o man that was amazing, great write sweetie keep it up. 5/5 def. im speechless
    -kit

  • 12 years ago

    by Delilah

    that is so deep shit..loved it

    Love.Live.Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Autumn

    wow, it's outstanding!

  • 12 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    wow. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Theresa

    That is really good make a part 2 please

  • 12 years ago

    by Summer

    I love that poem! you are very very talanted! thanks so much for writting it.<3333333
    -Summer-

  • 12 years ago

    by CaMeRoN

    that was a great poem,good one!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Anthony burke

    the poem was a nice read but there are parts that need work, sometimes it felt like you couldn't think of what to put so you just put a non-ryming word in there, nice over-all job 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Prettiest Zombie

    wow so good blar blar blar its gr8 idk wht 2 say so blar blar the blars count as gooooooood in my words gr8 all gd c ya xx

  • 12 years ago

    by _

    wow!! great poem really awesome ! 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PJ

    wow thats a great poem you need to thank you friends a little more it was wounderful heart felt hope to see more

  • 12 years ago

    by JLT

    *cries* It's beautiful, i love it. It's so sad. It's kinda like "Love's Curse". *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets.

    ~Jessica

  • 12 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Helloness..

    Man this poem was deadly you just wanna read more..each stanza keeps you stuck in..pm me when you write part 2..

    good luck with that..

    Lisa x)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashton

    i liked this a lot it was written well i wish i could write this way plz comment on mine

  • 12 years ago

    by Stinapoo1991

    Hey Emmy What's up that's really good i Likey let me write a poem and yeah okay byez

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    wow, great poem. I loved it keep up the good work.
    ~ItalianStallion~

  • 12 years ago

    by Katy......

    this was brilliant i now exactly how this person feels from personal experieces.
    Youv explained it so well

  • 12 years ago

    by R F

    Althogh its a traditional subject to write about, but I believe that everyone his unique way writting about something. and you do have your style, and its really nice to share writing a poem with friends, I love this idea.

    but I think the girl shouldn't kill her self, If the boy left her for another, he wouldnt even worth hurting herself for such a person. That's how i think things should be with such people
    That was so sad.

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis

  • 12 years ago

    by mz BrokenHearted B i t c h

    i loved ur poem it was really good i enjoyed it