nice poem i like it a lot keep it up 5/5 oh and thanks for your comment. and i dont worry i wont let no one push me back in to writing not till i am ready because i really do need time for myself and if i just come right back i it wont help me

nice poem .. i loved it.. it relates to alot of ppl..;)

Your good...
who is JAmes?...Is it someone you love?

I feel like that at times too, good poem 5!

Good poem

Aw, this is really touching, and I can relate. Great poem

Good jobe julie. even if james isnt there. i am. your awsome, i dont know what i would do without you here. we have 2 hang out soon. we have a lot of things to talk about.

Yeah I know you have to want to stop yourself and I really like what you said it makes a lot of sense and I guess I'm just not ready to let go of the past yet. I'm not fully recovered...... I just told my b/f last night about it and he totally doesn't understand but I felt like it was something I didn't want to hide from him anymore. If you have aim and ever want to talk my name is xl0vinaimlesslyx that's a zero no an o! Good poem by the way!!!!!
-Sarah

This is a very good poem, just like your other ones. You're a very good poet. Great Job.

--*NaydeeN*

Wow i like this a lot very sad but absolutely fantastic i love the last stanza

I need you,
More then you know,
Because right now I can't pick myself up,
From this desperate low.

it just finishes it so well well done
LOve and Smiles
Ally x

I really like this poem. It is very good. The poem flows nicely. Good job! I love reading your poems.

~Kyleene~

Omg that brought tears to my eyes i can relate to this...it was very very sad but it was very well written..i don't know if it's true! but if it is well -hugs- lol if not, it was a great story!