Comments : You can be my anything.

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    heya
    great poem=)
    i like the flow
    especially your last sentence..
    keep writting
    if u could.. pls check out my poems
    thanks&
    take cares
    smile always=)

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Thats another really lovely poem, well done it was really sweet and it made me laugh as well, I think its really nice that you have someone who you love so much, I wish you both the best of luck and I hope you are happy...

    These two lines really made me smile
    "You can be my internet
    That tells me odd info"

    Well done
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Delo

    I luv it....:D got nothing else to say... i just love it :):):):):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    This poem was so clever and creative your imagery was great. It was sweet but also had a bit of humor to it as well. I like your style unique poems really show talent! Brooke~ :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Awesome!! a 5/5 for sure, it had the most curcial thing, EMOTION, i loved it!! my only suggestion is make it into stanzas, gerat job 5/5!