Amazingly written and beautiful poem.
keep writing

:)

Omg wow...brilliant poem. very deep, also very imaginative... great work
i wish i could write that well... hehe
take care xx

"Memories of this will come undone,
A zip needs to be resewn.
A razor-sharp pain eased the hurt.
The light has now passed,
But I’m still left to clean up the wound,
And the mess that had me in tatters.
The scars left bleed eternally. "

this is my favourite bit it is crafted amazingly.

keep it up.
xox

Thats rli kwl. this poem represents alot of my m8s in away 2, ive showed them nd they like it 2. they told me 2 say its beautiful nd creative. which it rli is. well done 5/5