Comments : Trigger Tragedy (Huitain)

  • 12 years ago

    by Enya

    4/4. I like ur poem. Please check out some of mine!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow. Very nice ariana. you remind me of another poet that was on this site once. she was just so full of raw talent at a young age, it was just unfortuante she never came back. i hope you stay with us :)
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    The message is powerful and it reminds me of a scene in the movie 6 sence. good job, you have better but this one is still good and creative.

    ~Jacklyn