Oh my gosh. this is definitelt one of the very BEST poems i have ever read. it is soo amazingly descriptive. i lov some of the similies, like the one, " my heart pounding like a tribe dancing" or something like that. i really love that. incredible work. honestly, on a scale of 1-10, this poem is a 23. i'm not even joking. it's really that good. ok. i've said a mouthfull. so bye.