Comments : Powerless Dreamer

  • 13 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Wooow! I am literally lost for words and don't know what to say. This is a manificent piece of artistry and poetry at it's best Truly outstanding and amazing.

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 13 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Jacki,
    WOW...truly amazing piece...truly one that needs to be recognized. Awesome...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 13 years ago

    by Jacki

    Thank you guys, I almost thought people had forgotten that I even write poetry untill recently when I started to get comments again :)

    But thanks so much for the wonderful comments.

  • 13 years ago

    by quietlybreaking

    This poem has a beautiful flow, once again amazing imagery. sad, but it still warmed my heart, i loved it.
    mwahh,
    aylz

  • 12 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Amazing poem! so well written and unique. the imergry is fantastic. the flow seamless and it really captures the reader from begining to end.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    You inspire me... this is very amazing and fantastic,the message is great! its not boring to read very enjoyable... keep on writing i beleive, u do it well thanks....

  • 12 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Oh my gosh. this is definitelt one of the very BEST poems i have ever read. it is soo amazingly descriptive. i lov some of the similies, like the one, " my heart pounding like a tribe dancing" or something like that. i really love that. incredible work. honestly, on a scale of 1-10, this poem is a 23. i'm not even joking. it's really that good. ok. i've said a mouthfull. so bye.