Comments : The girl

  • 12 years ago

    by disenchanted

    Im glad there was a happy ending. Brilliant Poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry

    Please send me a private message -- explain how we are going to do this weekly contest -- I own my own web site that is dedicated to poetry and art and I thought I might be able to help place the weekly contest their as well as the winning poet and poem -- also, please click on my name and vote on my poetry -- I am new to this site and no one seems to be reading my work

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah

    What an amazing story. it hurts just to read it. sad things like that happen. you wrote the peice well although.. i did reconize a couple places that didn't really fall together right but overall it was a good poem*

  • 10 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A real story here that deserves to be written more about.