Hmmm...i wonder who whis is about??? hmmmm...hmmm...lol it's good thought.

I really liked this poem. it seems to me after all he does to you or to someone else he will always be there to catch you and you'll do the same. And if i'm wrong then mmmm huh?? lol but anyway keep it up. keep on writing love always and forever.

This is my favorite out of the 3 i have read it flows pretty good i htink you should try rhyming oce with the simplicity of your ideas i think rhyming is just required but 5/5