Comments : Tales of an eye....

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey yuniardi, that was beautiful.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    wish you have a nice time,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow, wow, wow, this was much better than you're other poems I think.
    I really enjoyed reading it as if it's
    the first time I'm reading it.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I like the emotion portrayed in this poem, and how you let people see through a different perspective, a life lived that is so different because of blindness. people take for granted the life they have, yet blind people, never seeing any innatimate objects, embrace the world for all it has to offer, even when never setting eyes upon life. it is amazing, but at the same time it is sad because they dont get to see beauty, ive always wondered, what is beauty to them? well anyway i loved this poem and keep it up