Hoping for freedom

by Elissa   Oct 7, 2005


Feeling...
So much doubt
Trapped...
With no way out

Bound...
Can't get away
Wishing...
It wasn't this way

Hurt...
There's nothing inside
Looking...
For a place to hide

Constrained...
Every single thought
Forever...
You have fought

Demons...
Calling from within
Believing...
That your a sin

Wondering...
How this could be
Hoping...
Someday to be free

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    How about "Hoping for freedom"

    Good poem by the way.
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Hm...idk, I guess you could call it trapt or..something that makes you like imprisoned or something cuz in this poem, tha's what you sound like, a prisoner. but it was good. title or no title. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Very well written! as an idea for a title?
    Trapped? or somthing like that? it seems to be about that...

    keep up the good work

    Ruby

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