Comments : When I Saw You!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather

    Good Job! Keep Writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry

    Really good for 13-year-old -- be more consistent with your sentence structure and rhyming -- learn how to incorporate correct punctuation into your verses

  • 13 years ago

    by K

    Are you sure your 13? Pretty good poem miss Kerri! Keep up the good work!!!!
    Keon aka Kwote