Comments : Hold me

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    Aww hun, mega sweet and a great write as always. 5/5 - I'm off to read the other one now.
    Emmi xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    Good poem, it was really cute, 5/5, take care,


  • 13 years ago

    by Toni


    Hold me in your arms,
    Until I fall to sleep,
    Cause when i lie without you baby,
    I can't help but weep,

    This first verse really set the scene and was so perfect in its own right. I love the imagery, its flawless...this poem really struck a chord with me.

    I want to take your pain away so much, if only i could give u a real hug instead of these crappy cyber ones!! *hugs*

    Thinking of you xx

  • 13 years ago

    by confusion

    Its amazing yet again. very sweet and almost peaceful. love it, love em all.