Comments : I Miss you...

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    Omg this poem is awesome. It's sooo sad *hugsies*. Love the first stanza.
    Emmi xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    That is an excellent poem, i love the images you used to describe how you feel, i particularly like this stanza:

    I miss you like a mouth with no tongue,
    It cannot speak, all these words left unsung,
    They just hang in the moment, caught up in the mind,
    Words left unspoken and all left behind,

    It was really sad, but really really good, well done, take care,

    *~Jen~*

  • 13 years ago

    by Toni

    Another brilliant poem! I had to read it a few times cos of the rhythm being irregular, but i actually dont think you should change that because it really helps to portray your emotions, especially the last three stanzas which are shorter. Its brilliant El xxx *hugs tightly*

  • 13 years ago

    by confusion

    Youre writings got een better hun. so original

    They just hang in the moment, caught up in the mind,
    Words left unspoken and all left behind,

    i love these lines, and its finished perectly.

    5/5, no question -x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-

  • 11 years ago

    by CJ Quintanilla

    This poem is awesome. i have nothing negative to say. i love the simile's and metaphors.