Woah captivating. I actually really like how this poem doesn't rhyme, cos it makes it more fluid and emotional, and its also different to read, i like how you experiment with different styles.

*hugs*love youp hun

I love it. just love it. so different. so amazing!!!

I knew you took something of me when you left but i never knew that you had taken the very beating of my heart

its stunning

bundles of hugs :)

Wow lelliekins i dunno wat to say. It's beautiful. Totally lost for words really i dunno what to say. If I cud give it a 6 i'd give it a 7. Really beautiful hunni.

Emmi xx

This is really beautiful - like an exerp from an amazing book, only more fluid.