Comments : You destroyed my life

  • 12 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Thank you for your comment. I'm sorry to hear you were raped. I was actually never raped I just decided to make a poem about it cuz I know someone how has been raped before who was close to me!
    Sammy

  • 12 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This subject matter is a tuff one to tackle but you did it so well done, it was wonderfully done, the emotions were all there, keep it up and always stay strong, If you need anyone Im always here

    Jenn *Hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    Amazing poem!!! although you've never been raped, you got the emotion across amazingly... i was physically abused when i was 6 by someone in my school and thats exactly how i felt for so long... ive finally been able to move on, but thats how i felt for many years. anyways, great poem! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • Really well written poem, very sad.
    Your emotion is very strong and you've put some great lines into this.
    Well done.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by chris

    I was raped and it was amazing how you knew how it feels. Thank you for putting into words

  • 12 years ago

    by Becca

    Awww...thts so sad. i was nearly raped. i manged to escape just in time but i know how it feels and u really described the suffuring afterwards very well. alotta emotion in there. could ya plz read my rapeture poem called "Haunting me for eternity" thx.
    *hugz*

    xbeccax

  • 12 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Beautiful sad poem with feeling.

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    A very moving poem. however, you need to stop using words that cheapen your poem "sappy". you have some great ideas but the rhyming can be a bit predicible. i still really liked this poem, but i think its suposed to go in rape stories?

    Ruby

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent excellent excellent. i hope this isnt true, but if it is i am very sorry. that was a gr8 poem, it had a gr8 flow to it, and the rhyming wasnt forced anywhere. definately keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Omg......! i love this poem...ur emotions were so real!? it's really really good! Thx 4 ur comment...i really enjoyed reading ur poems..Keep It ^!! keep writing!!

  • 12 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Wow, i can relate......awsome write!

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    A very moving poem. It has a lot of emotion and a good rhyme scheme. Keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    Again a good idea, but your style is messy and your rhymes in every poem are very very simple, using a rhyming dictionary and a thesuarus isn't cheating or anything this is what they are made for so much of this was soooo forced the part that was the worst to me was this

    Are you happy
    Now all I can be is sappy

    that really dosn't even make sense sappy means to be silly, or like mushy and sentimental....if someone raped me i'd be pissed off and sad not sappy...so yeah very forced imma go with a 3/5 i didn't really like this

  • 12 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow hun i am soooooo very sorry i was almost in you place but got lucky i am sorry you didnt if you need to talk email me anytime

  • 12 years ago

    by kiesha

    Good poem. I could tell that you put a lot of emotion itnot it. I'm so sorry that this happened to you. Keep writing and take care.
    > Kiesha

  • 12 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    Awww! That was so sad. Did this really happen to you, or do you know of someone who felt this way? Either way, excellent poem! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more from you. Check out my poems sometime!

    ~Holla Back~

    ~~Sydney~~

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    Your rhymes in this poem seemed very forced and I suggest you don't do that often or at least avoid doing so. I know we all switch words around to make it rhyme, because I do it too, but it doesn't mean it's a good thing.

    You topic of death and rape is very cliche, but there were some parts of the poem that reallt caught my attention.

    I still gave you a 5/5 for effort.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by A Heart Losing Hope

    Not bad, agreeing with atomic on cliche, but well written (specially if you havent been raped) 4/5 nice job

  • Really really really good. keep writing. love the last part: This is for the better
    That is why I'm writing you this letter
    Every word of this feeling is true
    All I can say now is that...
    I love you-LOVE IT

  • 12 years ago

    by Lestat

    I.. sadly have gone through the same thing as you.. i know how it can suddenly change everything.. Great poem .. I hope your okay..
    x lestat x