Comments : Addictive

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    I love it i love it i love it

    diverts the attention of my brain,

    that was my favorite line i always say its to take away the pain from my head and that was worded perfectly

    lots of love
    ☼Becky☼

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    This was a great poem and I know how you feel I was there myself before. The way you wrote this was amazing and the words were excellent 5/5
    Jennifer

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I am honestly speechless, by far that is the best poem you have written and i'm so moved. it's so cleverly written. seriously that is excellent xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    I liiiiiked it hammer. Very cleversome yesum, yes it was. and its true, im glasd u see it as an addiction, cos it is its an illness. welldun luvvy xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Love it, 5/5! good writing skills.

    Check out some of my poems too, I would like to hear what you think about them. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku every1, ur comments mean a lot, keep it up! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    LOVE IT! keep it up hunny*HUGS*

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    I can relate to this one hun and i guess quite a few others can also. greatly written though 5/5 xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Jo

    Dang, that was good! great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Ohhh i hearts it babe:D

    thanx for commentin min *gives virtual hug :D*

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku guys! ur all great :) xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    I have been a cutter; since, the age of thirteen. I do not think cutting is an appropriate option to my stress,but at times, I feel so misunderstood. I know what you're going through. I know it may be difficult, you may not have any friends, you may feel hopeless/worthless inside, but really, it's not worth cutting over. I'm trying to stop cutting, but in your poem, you're right, it feels like it's nothing, but an addiction.

    If you ever need anyone to listen, I will always be here for you. I will never turn my back, judge you, reject you, hurt you in anyway possible. I've had this happen to me, too many times; therefore, why hurt others? Usuaully, people like you and myself, we tend to hurt ourselves, before we'd ever anyone else.... Well; anyway, I'm here if you need me...

    GREEEEEAT POEM.... very well expressed.

    Thanks for sharing. :o)

    ((((((Big Hugs)))))))

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    I'm speechless
    great poem ^^

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku every1, it means so much to me xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Wow... amazing
    so true, cutting is very addictive and is always on your mind
    wonderful way of expressing your feelings, everything flowed and rhymed beautifuly

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Thanku xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ValerieJg

    I lik this one.. i have a poem about addiction too. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ANNE

    This couldn't be more true!! I think a lot would agree with you on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vicki

    That was deep Em, really well written. xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Wow, awesome piece, the beat of this is flawless which really adds to the poetic side of things. As for the content, I think your descriptions are vivid, they are also quite disturbing but I'm guessing that was intentional. Really nice work overall, 5/5 :)