Comments : Promise

  • 11 years ago

    by brittany

    Great wrk i love it. its really sweet:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Atomic,

    That is a nice dedication and a thoughtful write. I have but one criticism about the first line, I think you should re-write as follows: -

    "Another year has come and gone."

    Well done.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Was this poem dedicated to all of us? Because I'm crying like it would be...Good Lord that has to be the sweetest thing I've read in such a while...Every word spoken was just so powerful as if you were speaking not only to Anthony but to people who read it. I felt I was in his shoes..I love poems like this is this is a a good "pick-me-up" poem for him when he is down. What a terrific friend you seem to be. And although it is his birthday, you deserve some credit as well! Great Job I loved it!
    With Love,
    ~Chelsey 5/5

    P.S. Happy Birthday Anthony!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Atomic...What a thoughtful and heartfelt thing to do...writing this for such a great guy....You truly seem to be a precious friend that anyone would be proud to have...this was precious...great job....

    Love Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Wonderfully written! He is lucky to have a friend such as you.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Atomic ......
    This was a beautiful poem for Anthony's birthday ..
    You are truly a wonderful caring friend ..no wonder he loves you so ...
    You can feel the love and support in each word ... Beautiful dedication ........

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very nice, I enjoy the way you use words. Touching poem

  • 11 years ago

    by LettersFromEnnis

    This poem is nice! Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Omg that is SOOOO good! geez. that is so sweet...gr8 gr8 gr8 poem! wow...u have such a gr8 gift..i hope u use it well! 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Anthony

    Atomic! I love you too! I told you and Brittany this earlier and I still mean it! Thank you for the best birthday I've ever had! I still taste the chocolate cake! ^_^ mmm!!! LOL I will see you later! This is the best poem I've ever heard and not just because its written for me!

    ~Anthony

  • 11 years ago

    by Caity

    This is a really awesome poem! keep written cuz u rock!

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Aww, that's just lovely. I'm sure Anthony enjoyed this poem. You are such a good friend, haha, you are uber cool and very good at writing poetry. The love between friends and family, it's a great gift indeed.

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Beautiful poem =]

  • 11 years ago

    by ~jordan~

    OMG, i absolutly love your poem! It is beautiful in every way, shape, and form. You are very gifted and Anthony must be an awesome person for you to write this about him.

    Lots-of-love,
    ~ jordan ~
    AKA: volleybabe

  • 11 years ago

    by disazngurllove

    Great poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    This poem is sooooo great!!! Anthony is lucky to have a friend like you. I mean come on.....no bday present beats that lol well GREAT POEM

    *DOUBLE THUMBS UP!!!*

    luv jess xoxoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Syn

    Well... anyway... that is a very very good poem.. it touched me... i give you a 5/5 ... hope to talk to you soon.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very well expressed. Thanks for participating in the friendship contest! Congratulations, you came in as first place! 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle

    Thanks for participating in the friendship poetry contest ~!~ Very good poem! Well expressed. Keep up the great work! 5/5!

    Michelle

  • 11 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Nice poem. all the words were everything in a friend good job