Comments : The Girl

  • 12 years ago

    by Leona

    This poem is (Excellent) i love every line.
    keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    Juls...... EXCELLANT!!!!!!!!..... If you ever need to talk to me, email me at my email add...... look on my profile and get it....


  • Wooow hunny i loved it. i think a good poet is someone who wrotes abotu things that happen to them or to tohers in real life well done i loved it
    loves ya lots xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Bug1219

    Awesome on a scale on 1 to 10 i give u a 100! gr8 work!

  • 12 years ago

    by tastefull

    Wow you are some writer u have a lot of feeling and emotion into your poems!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachael Young

    Luffed it Galfriend ;]
    Nah lol it was very good

  • WOW! is all i have to say juls, just wow

  • 12 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Another long yet truly brill one hun:) i love the first two lines

    The girl is walking down a path
    with shadows of death above

    nicely done, keep it up:)


  • 12 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is very good, The rhyme worked well. The only thing I suggest is some major spelling errors that distract from the poems quality... " Happieness" and "lye". anyway other than that great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    I agree about the spelling mistakes, but that could be keyboard error right? lol. but i loved this one!! keep it up. you rock,