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This poem is (Excellent) i love every line.
keep it up
by Betty Boop
Juls...... EXCELLANT!!!!!!!!..... If you ever need to talk to me, email me at my email add...... look on my profile and get it....
Wooow hunny i loved it. i think a good poet is someone who wrotes abotu things that happen to them or to tohers in real life well done i loved it
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Awesome on a scale on 1 to 10 i give u a 100! gr8 work!
Wow you are some writer u have a lot of feeling and emotion into your poems!!!
by Rachael Young
Luffed it Galfriend ;]
Nah lol it was very good
by the love of another fills my soul
WOW! is all i have to say juls, just wow
by Pure Silence
Another long yet truly brill one hun:) i love the first two lines
The girl is walking down a path
with shadows of death above
nicely done, keep it up:)
This is very good, The rhyme worked well. The only thing I suggest is some major spelling errors that distract from the poems quality... " Happieness" and "lye". anyway other than that great work.
I agree about the spelling mistakes, but that could be keyboard error right? lol. but i loved this one!! keep it up. you rock,