Comments : The Heart of The Eyes

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written and heartfelt. Great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    Awww what a sad poem :'(
    chin up champ :P
    You write so well, it makes me smile.
    "Blinking it away,
    A single tear rolled down.
    Hitting the heart at home,
    Slowly it begins to drown."

    awesome line. I don't usually comment on a stanza, but that was awesome. (reminds me of something I would say :P )

  • 12 years ago

    by Anthony

    Oh wow atomic... I never knew this side of you. There are so many!! My favorite lines were
    "The sorrows of yesterday,
    Reflected brightly in its shine.
    Its innocence and loneliness,
    Became one as it entwine."

    You did a great job with this poem. I great new twist on a universal theme!

    ~Anthony

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job, great rhymes! very soul touching poem

  • 12 years ago

    by SMILEoften

    The sorrows of yesterday,
    Reflected brightly in its shine.
    Its innocence and loneliness,
    Became one as it entwine.

    Woooow!! My gawsh hunn[y].. Awesome job! Thanks for all the comments, BTW. I give you a big 5/5.. *applauds* keep up the good work..Nd kepp yah head up..you'll get through :):)

    ``~.:Shanna

  • 12 years ago

    by Lyla

    Woah. That was really good. It was so unique. Something about it i havent seen on this site before. The words are in harmony with each other and it sounds so beautiful! Great job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Atomic, thai was filled with such tremendous emotion and so well written. Good job!

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    Posture broken down,
    Emotionally torn apart.

    for some reason i just really like the useage of the word posture, and in fact, i like a lot of ur word choices, which ive always found important in poetry. keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    Wow...amazing!!! you're extremely talented. keep it up.
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautifully written and so heartfelt....

    Love Ann

  • Omfg so good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Atomic ...
    A truly touching poem ..
    Such an emotional piece ..
    Beautiful job as always ....

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweetist sin

    I loved it b/c i know what u mean and i so relate to it!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well written, beautiful and yet sad. You have a true talent; I look forward to reading more of your poetry, as I am now hooked. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Renae

    WOW! What else can i say other then it was great!

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephy

    Very good....i liek it!-xxx-

  • 12 years ago

    by Letty

    This is fantastic . I know the feeling . I only wish the words would come to me as they do you .

    P.S. please check out my poetry .

  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel

    Great poem!!!5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Sad and heartfelt. The words you chose are totally amazing and its all put together so beautifully.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela