Oh...it's very good...flow very smoothly...let the reader capture the feeling...so it's pretty well done...now about the comment u left me...

Of course...if my friend chooses a boy over me...well...she's not a true friend then...that I know...but sometimes...the boy is the 1 who cheated on both side..so...u do hev 2 think about it...things not always what it seems...I learn that...if ever my friend is a b****...I really won't be her friend...I will only pity those people...well...ur comment just gev me an idea...but 1 thing 4 sure...there's no use getting angry 4 a friend who do not value u...I can tell u 1 thing 4 sure...if my friend purposely stab me at the back...I will still forgive her...cause I don't think it will do me any good if I can't let go of whatever it is...well...that's it i guess...once again...thanks 4 ur comment

I hope you stay strong and that things get better for you, no one deserves things like this. i know, i've had a similar problem, when you get fed up leave. it doesn't have to be forever but the relationship should change.