Comments : Staring out of my window

  • 12 years ago

    by Mona

    Hey Rosie,

    I've been waiting for a new poem. And here it is.

    What a lovely poem Rosie. It flows, it really does.

    What I like most about this poem is that I can relate to it. I do that to. My bed is actually in front of the window, and when I go to bed, sometimes I leave the curtains open, and watch the stars, wondering if (like you said) if there is another world, a better place then we have here.

    I could feel it. I could feel the the.. well.. kind of hopelessness. I truly love this poem. It is wonderful.

    Very well writin. Once again you showed how talented you are. The way you play with words is amazing. Very well done.

    Excellent.

    Take care Rosie, lotsaaaa love and hugs. -xxx-

    Mona

  • 12 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Ehem, I think I read this too, lol, alright, it's good, I really love it, keep up the great work...

  • 12 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Aww wow, so inspiring, i'm look out my window and thought of those same things too...dont worry and dont give up. poetry always helps me carry on and you'll find strength in it too:)
    xxxxweepingxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Smile and the whole world will smile with you. Very heartfelt yet beautifully written.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela