What a lovely poem Rosie. It flows, it really does.
What I like most about this poem is that I can relate to it. I do that to. My bed is actually in front of the window, and when I go to bed, sometimes I leave the curtains open, and watch the stars, wondering if (like you said) if there is another world, a better place then we have here.
I could feel it. I could feel the the.. well.. kind of hopelessness. I truly love this poem. It is wonderful.
Very well writin. Once again you showed how talented you are. The way you play with words is amazing. Very well done.
Aww wow, so inspiring, i'm look out my window and thought of those same things too...dont worry and dont give up. poetry always helps me carry on and you'll find strength in it too:)