Great job! this was a terrific poem!...i liked it alot.

Im sorry to hear that. I can relate to her feelings. They aren't something anyone wants to go through.

Omg
that got me choked up!!!!
i love it
great job
5/5

Wow great poem...sorry bout ur friend...i know shes in a better place now...5/5
-HUGS N KISSES!

WOw thats great... i really liked it but i no how it feels to be pretty and noone sees anything else... im srry bout that misfortune but greawt work anyway!~

Great job, very powerful. Im sorry for your loss. take care XXXXX
JL

OMG WoW that was really great, i felt what you wrote.You have a talent thats for sure..Look at some of my poems and tell me what you think. Take care, Love Nat mwa

Wow this story is so sad. You can not describe that way io felt when I read this poem But you do write very well. True stories are always are hard to read because it hurts to see that someone like you could have helped but you are right i would have done the same thing and said she was fine, but great job I LIKED ThE POEM

Dang this is a very sad but good poem i really like it and you should keep writing...I'm sorry about your loss. I just lost my grandma i wrote a poem for her too you should read/rate it sometime...

Omg wow thatsrelly goodmade my hart stop =o
amazing...
lovelove
keep writing
xxxxxxxxxx

Loved it dearly.

I love this poem....it is great....do not ever stop writeing... your doing great....

Wow

Wow.. this was an amazing poem.. im very sorry for your loss.. dont stop writing - trista

So Sorry. Great Poem of expression. Take Care

So Sorry. Great Poem of expression. Take Care

That was so good but it was also sad i hope u might help anyone who is like her.

Awwww!!! This is sooo good!! Keep up the good work!~!
Hayley

Hey, this is such a beautiful poem, well done.
im really sorry for your loss, if you ever need to talk to anyone, you know where i am.
anyway, well done,
love Soph

Wow...that's all i can say
amazing...beautifully written
good job