Comments : Life Sentence

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Wonderfully written. I am sending this to my sister in the hopes that she will choose to make a change in her life. I'm afraid she won't though. Stay strong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Geoff Clemence

    Excruciating! memories will last forever but the pain goes away...

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice work with this one... it is well written and well thought out... i personally liked it and i'm going to read some more of your poems and add you onto my favorites list... nice job!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Awww this is so sad, i hate to live like this, keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Great poem, well written and so expresive

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    It was so good i liked it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Woh - a serious poem with a serious talent. I am sorry for the content but I appreicate the talent you have for writing. I only wish that one day you are set free =)

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow this was really good and really emotional! Im sorry you have to go through with this! I gave you a 5/5 :))

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    It sounded very strong, simple but dark and it left me with a kind of tingle up my spine. That marriage can do that is cruel.

    //Truest Lies//

  • Wow that is sooo sad...is anybody that u loved on life sentance or somethin cuz thats what it feels like...but the wordz that u used got to me and i have to say that u are a wonderful poet...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Excellent poem. Very sad. I'm so sorry you and your children had to go through the abuse of your ex-husband.
    5/5 forsure.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Wow... speechless. im just sorry you had to go through that. you'll get through it, keep your head up high.
    you have my prayerz. 5/5

    Much Love,
    BX Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. beuatifully written. had a lot of depth to it. i like how you didnt desribe it too much into detail because it gives us readers room to think what you meant. awesome piece! =) great job;)

    -emotionless19

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very weii written the pem gets the pint accross

  • 18 years ago

    by Mel

    Well that was one of the best endings I've read to a poem on the site.

  • 18 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Amazing poem! I love the fact you have told such a powerful story in so few verses. You are very talented x

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Wow... I'm sorry to keep praising you on your sorrows... but you have a talent... keep writing. 5/5

    Life is a matter of perspective. There's always light at the end of a tunnel.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Such i deep meaning only a select few would trully understand about. well done. i loved the emotion in this poem.

    the ending i thought could have been a bit stronger. but still well done again.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I am glad you had the strength to make a change. What a sad and heartwrenching story. Thanks for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very emotional poem, you expressed you feeling, pain and sadness excellently. You wrote it in interesting way. i don't like few lines, but all in all this poem is very good.