A comment for both of you:
I'm overwhelmed with such powerful emotion! A great poem, it was just like watching an entire movie. The christmas feel was right in there opening that merry season. The emotion of wanting someone was on a high and then it grew intense as he walked through the door. I could go on, but I'll be here all night!!!! I am impressed with this piece, well done the two of you :)

Great job you two. A beautiful piece with the Christmas feel and the desire for love....Beautiful....

Love ya, Ann

The dynamic duo is born!!. My personal opinion after reading this story is the two of you together are untouchable. Don't get me wrong you are both talented on you own. But together WOW. Job well done Great imagination in the story. Gives you the sense that you are their watching these two people 5/5

Thanks for expressing your opinion about my poem. I totally agreed that it felt incomplete i changed the end a little it seems a little better-by they way i don't write just dark poems i have some others-Looking forward to reading the Dynamic Duo's latest masterpiece-Thanks

You two young ladies are very talented and when you bring two talents like yours together you get a masterpiece such as this. Beautiful and breathtaking..........

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I'm in tears laughing at this poem, seriously.

Whyyyy would you comment this and bring attention to our retarded ways of writing hahahahhaa

WE WERE SO TOTALLY AWESOME! Bahahaha

I COULDNT HELP IT. People need to understand how incredible we were bahahaha.