This is such a good poem and i would like to commend you on being such a strong person and never losing your faith. from what you say about your mother in this poem, she seems like a truely strong woan. you must of inherited her strength as well. again, beautiful poem. 5/5!! feel free to check out mine, loving you is my secret and my other one is called take me to the place
Omg when i read this i swear i cried it is soo sad i was balling this is a really good poem its soo sad but im sorry to hear about your mom and im sure gods taking care of her in heven this is a really awesome poem extremely sad omg its sooo good. okay well keep up the good work
It's seems like I been away from here for ever. I miss this damn place! The poetry and the people! I so quickly forget the talent within this site...and then I come and kicks me right in the head! lol
Reading your poem made me think hard about the day I'll be forced to say good bye to my mother. I can't imagine the pain felt inside for there is no greater love than a mother. Your emotion grabs the reader is this Miss Ann...the struggle is definitely heard but you wrote it gracefully and without trouble it seems. I can't say I understand or know where you're coming from as I do NOT...but I will say she IS with you. You speak of your faith in the Lord...so remember he allows her to be with you. I hope your holidays are wonderful! Do take care!
Now...I got some catching up to do. Merry Christmas!!!
I've never really experienced coping with the death of a loved one..I guess you could say I'm lucky in a way. my grandmother often talks about death and if anything should happen to her, I don't know what I'd do. I admire your strength and courage. I'm sure your Mom is very proud of you. take care! happy holidays!!!