I wrote this song when I was in Belgium and I drew inspiration from my boyfriend who was back home. Reading it 2 years later and after I broke up with him I realized it describe what was suppose to my current boyfriend now. My next poems/songs on love are about him as well. Comments are loved!!
That's a very sweet and lovely poem. It felt like it was written straight out from the heart. The emotions displayed in these lines were excellent. Thought the lines are straggly, I find that it flows pretty well.
When I read a poem, I'd always look at the length first then start with the first stanza to see if it's a worth read. But when I started out with the first line, it took me right in the ride. Great stuff. I like the repetitions it sounds somewhat like a lyric.
Very addictable. Thanks for sharing. Anyway, thanks for your comment on my poem, I appreciate that. =)