Comments : Withered Into Madness

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Great poem. and a creative twist to the tow as well. it's a fresh read and you did wonderful with it. great poem


  • This piece is brilliant! fantastic write. you have amazing talent... excellent poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kevin

    Hey Holly.

    As Bob said this is faultless in terms of the use of language and the tempo etc....the only this i'd say is that it's a tad cliche, even though it's where it belongs in the dark section....and it is above par...i couldn't help feeling you could have been a little more original with your obvious skill.


  • 12 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    Very dark, very subtle. I like it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This is absolutely amazing!!! Holly! your mastery of language and emotions is simply astounding!

    good luck and peace

  • 12 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Wow is all I can muster ... good work

  • 12 years ago


    Nicely written. keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by David R Merry

    Hiyu Holly! ...... brilliant script!
    I know exactely how you you felt when you wrote this peice! ..... I`m Looking forward to reading some more from you!

    All the best

  • 11 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Wat a beautiful poem, i love it, you r a great writer. bye.