This poem was so good man.

"confusing faith,
while pulling it
from underneath Your god's fingernails,
back into Your mouth-
A child's-birth, re-
versed."

"I wouldn't be wondering
what it is that You're talking about
because thought
removed from intention
would tell its own story

make its own pictures,

live its own life,

taking no prisoners. "

I really liked those parts but the whole poeam was very attention grabbing and you hid the menaing in a very interesting way.

great job.