Absolutely love it.. i reminds me of what happend to me, so similar to what you write.. ur really good...

Very nice work.....syner

"I'm a game you love to play" I love that line. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. Very nice work. Keep it up and please check out some of my work as well.

I think this poem is awsm i am torn up in a realtionship at the moment n that is like me all over that you 4 your help i would love 2 talk 2 u if u read this me email is HunnBee182@hotmail.com

Another awesome poem!!! I love your work, every one of your poems speak to me in words that I can't yet speak!! Keep it up! Love lots, Ashley

This is soooo good, i just got done with a guy like this! i finally stopped talking to him after he did that to me way too many times, good poem!

That reminds me of a fight i had with my x...i was screaming "go on, hurt me more, leave me here crying another night with the pain you flow out of your mouth"....god i hate him for what he became in the end, but it hurts more to go back to them, even though in your mind you think itll be just fine... anyway, awsome poem keep it up!

Lv chloe oXO! read summa' mine.

WOW!

Nice but sad poem somehow. i like it! excellent!