Comments : Let it show

  • 11 years ago

    by flawed diamond

    I like this. YOur girlfriend is very lucky. Nice job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Justin

    Kudos for the encouraging comment.. Wow this is kind of a personal poem that not everyone would understand the same way as you probably do, but I think you expressed your feelings very well through this piece, it was sweet and cute. Good job. 5/5 No negative critique to give. ^_^

    jess

  • 11 years ago

    by hewholovesherthemost

    This poem's awesome cuz its sweet and well written, keep on writing

  • 11 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Wow! that was really good! And you may think that this is stupid, but i don't know how to get published either! i thought that you knew since you are such a great poet and all! n-e-wayz! That was a great way to express your feelings about your girlfriend! i am talking about the poem incase you are confused! 5/5 keep it up! you truely are an amazing poet!

  • 11 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    You gf is very lucky yo have someone like you! this poem shows how much you care about her how much you love her and don't want to lose her....I hope you stay this...forever:) great job and keep it up:) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    You gf is very lucky yo have someone like you! this poem shows how much you care about her how much you love her and don't want to lose her....I hope you stay this...forever:) great job and keep it up:) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    I liked this very much! This has actually become one of my favorite poems on this site! I didn't mean to rush you with the whole getting published thing! 5/5/ keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu

    This is amazing! you are truely an artist. If a guy wrote me a poem like that, I would probably cry I'd be so touched! but excelent job! 5/5 = ]

  • 11 years ago

    by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu

    I put another poem on my site thingy that I had to write for school, but I will try to write some more...I'm kinda new at this, & I can't just sit down & write when I feel like it. I'm going skiing with my youth group this weekend, so maybe I will somehow be "inspired". I don't know. But thanks for all the encouragement!

  • 11 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow! this was...sweet, beautiful, awesome, touching...your gf is very very lucky to have sumone to write poetry for her i wish my bf would do that for me lol... all of your poems are totally awesome and all leave me speechless i dont really kno wut to say...keep it up and thnx for the comments and i have been working on a longer one...take care
    ~Sandra~