I love the comments from all the the youngin's from your generation but let me say that you are an extremely POWERFUL writer for your age (or any age). I love to write and thanks for commenting on my poem but you are so intense in your writing. Such passion, such conviction and oh so grown up. Slow down girl..........your mind is well above your maturity.
I would love to say "good job" but there is so much muscle in your writing that praise can easily go unexpressed. Write a book - you got it girl.