I thought this was good.

I really like it. But the the flow sort of changes from beginning to end: some of the lines are longer and sometimes sound a little awkward. but on a whole i love. maybe a little reorganiztion is my suggestion. the second stanza is my favorite

Nice!

Nice.

Wow this is great and really realistic. I love the ending. Keep up the good work!

imi

Wow this is great and really realistic. I love the ending. Keep up the good work!

imi

I love it babe=) a really honest poem,
u tell it like it is....
i like that=)
5/5
Damionxxx

Thats cool!!!

Wow man... thats good 5/5

Hmm... okay.

Hey this is a very interesting peice i am william i did not get to ask if u wanted to be friends when we was in the chat rom will u read one of my poems

Thats good and true

Wow
if the guy realy did this im soz
this is realy good
and shows how u feel
xoxroxyxox

Nice!!!

An honnest piece, could have flowed better though otherwise the words used and content on a whole was good

Now this is a good poem. The only thing I can find wrong with it is some of the lines are a bit long which disrupts the flow a bit but apart from that-great stuff.

That was really great...i understand this poem...i can relate...and that adds something...and the picture you get...It is amazing...Nice job...
Emma 5/5

I can definitely relate to that alot...I absolutely loved it!!! keep it up 5/5

This had a different ending to what I expected. And, That's a good thing. It wasn't predictable. I thought this was a great poem. If only all girls were like this. I thought it was great. Keep it up! 5/5 And thank you for your comment.

`Taleee. xx.

P.S. Incase you don't know what name I used for the other poem. This was it..

-*»TaLeEe! ( F P C D ) at 2006-06-27

If you go in your poem and click on that name, it will take you straight to my profile. Just so you know I'm not lying. =)

That is a really good poem! Very honest. I cant relate but I still enjoyed reading it---I like the flow how most lines are the same length, but some are longer,,,its unique. Great write! 5/5