I think this is one of your best pieces
the fact that it didn't rhyme makes no difference
you can tell this was from your heart
i admire you at times like these
this makes me feel like i can't wait to feel that type of love
as i read through this i felt i was seeing it through your eyes
i almost had knots in my stomache too as i was waiting to see what she said
the title fits so perfectly
this is a goregous poem
lol i feel like i should be thanking you for writing this =s
as i said, one of your best pieces
hope to read more like this
loveux.

Oh my God hunny.
I love this one so much, you had me in tears.
I can relate so much it hurts, In life we all make life changing mistakes, some for the better and some for the worse.
Mine was for the worse, and Im not sure what yours was, In a way your showing hope but also loss.
This was an excellent poem, really touching, my heart beated faster while reading, Its like you knew everything I have never told anyone.

Excellent!!!

Love,
-Lisa x0x

....
This poem was the hard hitting pain i was waiting for
memories like this dont fade
they build up inside...
Not a second goes by that i dont think of telling you things...
The day you said goodbye is a day i'll never forget
I miss you
xxxx

I wish I could say something sweety.. But no matter what I would say.. It wouldn't tell you how much I loved this poem.

You know, It's hard to translate words into feelings.

But you no.. you..don't write words
You write feelings.
You don't use ink
You use blood and tears
You don't write in on paper.. oh no.. You carve it in our hearts

That's why you are so fantastic.

I love you sweety -xxx-