Hey..great subject and flow, could almost be a song. I love the idea and the feeling put into this. You have talent

Aww hun.. I can really relate to this.. As a child I know I looked up to him.. And worshiped and prayed.. But now after everything I've been through I think I've almost lost my faith.. I know there is a God well at least I hope.. This is an amazing poem.. Great job 5/5
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I'm not one to believe in the lord, but i really liked this poem! you've done a great job!...........luv em

I understand quite a bit of what you've been through.. it's hard I know.
Great poem, I have to say.

Mark

Cooliofied, this is a good poem about faith, normally not the kind of poem I like (not religious, and no I don't worship satan) but it was very good

"Oh Lord how I yearn for you
But I felt betrayed by you
So I strayed away from you "

this seemed more like a vent to me...I'm sure many can relate to that ^^ stanza. One can only hope that we find our way back...great write!

Wow... strong poem

well done

Jacs
xxx

Wow.. this is reli gud.. i lyk how u repeated the stanzas evry now n then.. produced a clearer view of the poem.. i lyk ur rhyme scheme, and the flow wasnt that bad.. gr8 job
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NannO

This poem is very deep!
I can honestly relate to this......
like EVERYTHING. even what you
went through.....Anyways just wanted to
tell you never to give up. Someday in the
future you will find someone who needs
of your help and love. And you are gonna feel
glad you could help someone. Keep Going honey......In the end it will be worth it. Well keep writin those poems..........

I can see all the emotins that you put into your poems and thats what makes them so good !!! Good job!

This poem is so beautiful and has so much meaning to it. it is absolutelt beautiful and a really inspirational piece of poetry. 5/5 xXx