Chris,

This was very thought provoking. Nicely penned.

Best regards,

Steve

Hey thanks, i know what you mean, but it's just, often i write and then decide like the rhythm after, or just leave it as one long continuous thought, and it's hard sometimes to find a pattern or a presentation of the text that doesn't destroy the flow of the poem. It's like being stuck between the devil and the deep blue sea sometimes. Thanks for the constructive criticism though, it's much appreciated, i'll bare it in mind next time i feel inspired :)